The Water Tower
The water was as green as an ugly Toad and so Murky that it made you feel sick. It was so big that when you were inside you could hear nothing. Silence. It the depths of the tower there were lizards, snakes and the worst deadly killer Piranhas. They could kill with one bite and people walked past in terror.
Nightmares were caused by the horror of the tower critters who lived in the depths of the Tower. Children wouldn't sleep at all. But to be honest the main reason most people couldn't sleep is because of the terrible stench. It was so bad that people would faint.
Disgusted, tourists left the minute after they arrived. The longest anyone had stayed was a minute and a half.The tower was 50 feet tall and you could see little bits of cloud floating aroud at the top of it.But even the clouds above it where a murky green coller.
1 comment:
Well done Harry. I think you definitely created suspense especially at the beginning of the story. Can you go on to describe the horror of the tower?
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